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Use directions to shape a scene

1 · Learn

Read: ELLA: [quietly] I thought you had left. JAY: [putting down a bag] I came back for the map. ELLA: Then we can look together.

Speaker labels tell who talks; directions guide actions or delivery. The words do not tell us everything about the relationship. Perform the scene, then explain which choices are supported and which are your interpretation.

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2 · Worked example

I say Ella's first line quietly because the script directs it. I do not automatically add shouting or anger without evidence.

3 · Your turn

What did Jay return for? Which instruction tells an actor how loudly to deliver a line?

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The map. '[quietly]' guides Ella's delivery.

4 · Apply your learning

Perform with a partner, swapping roles. Add a short continuation that follows the scene, then distinguish your new lines from the original text.

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Read and discuss whole books, poems and plays alongside these original short models. Give evidence for interpretations and accept well-supported alternatives. Revisit spelling and handwriting over time; retain individual decoding support where needed.

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