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Let dialogue change the scene
1 · Learn
A narrative combines setting, character and events. Dialogue works best when it reveals a character or moves the action forward, rather than filling space with greetings. Surrounding actions can show a response without explaining every emotion directly.
Original model: '“Use my card,” Tessa said, pushing her unfinished model aside. Ravi looked at the gap in his bridge. “But then yours will not be ready.”' The exchange introduces a choice and a possible cost.
2 · Worked example
I infer Tessa is offering help at a cost to her own work. To continue, I must decide what Ravi does with the offer rather than repeat the same conversation.
3 · Your turn
Write two sentences continuing the scene so Ravi makes a decision. Keep the characters and problem consistent.
Check your answer
Example: 'Ravi took only a narrow strip. “We can strengthen both bridges if we share it,” he said.' Other coherent decisions are valid.
4 · Apply your learning
Plan, draft and revise a short scene with one turning point. Read dialogue aloud to check punctuation and purpose.
Adult guidance and safety
Read the supplied text together if needed. Accept well-supported alternative interpretations, not invented evidence. Use wider whole books, poems and plays alongside these short original models; provide specific feedback on writing and revisit spelling over time.
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