A quotation needs an explanation

1 · Learn

An analytical paragraph makes a focused claim, selects relevant evidence and explains how the language or structure supports it. A quotation alone does not analyse itself. Avoid attaching a fixed effect to a device without considering its context.

For 'The room held its breath', a paragraph can discuss personification and suspended movement. It should explain what the image suggests about this room or moment, not repeat a definition of personification.

2 · Worked example

I write that the room seems tense because 'held its breath' transfers a human response of anticipation to the setting, making the silence feel expectant.

3 · Your turn

Why is 'This is personification' incomplete analysis of the phrase?

4 · Apply your learning

Write and revise a paragraph about a supplied short passage, checking that every quotation supports the same main point.